Inside the Acquisition Boardroom: Editor Stacy Cantor Abrams on Lisa Burstein’s Dear Cassie

Acquiring a second novel from an author is very different from acquiring his or her debut. Whereas a debut is a blank slate to be molded as it will, a sophomore novel brings with it the expectations of the first and the pressure to do even better. So in many ways, it’s harder to sell a second novel than it can be to sell a first.

It wasn’t hard for me to decide to acquire Lisa Burstein’s second novel, Dear Cassie, which both works as a sequel to her debut Pretty Amy and as a stand-alone novel. And not only because Lisa’s found a loyal and vocal fan base for her writing. On a surface level, the book felt more romantic and relationship-based than Amy did, with Cassie’s tense and beautiful relationship with Ben at the forefront—always a plus in today’s teen market—but it also dealt with a ubiquitous teen issue that many teens find fascinating, explored a character many readers had already expressed wanting to know more about, and was formatted as an epistolary diary set at a unique “summer camp.” The fact that I got to edit out approximately three hundred f-bombs was an added bonus.

But I think what’s been the most gratifying about working on what is actually my third book with Lisa, including Pretty Amy and her New Adult companion novella, The Next Forever, is that each book of Lisa’s isn’t just a story—it’s an experience. Whether readers relate to these characters or not, whether they find them fascinating, horrifying, humorous, over-the-top, or even too close to real life, her stories make readers feel—discomfort, anticipation, sorrow, sympathy, empathy, disgust, delight, and oh so much more—and they make them talk. Which, with teen readers, can truly be a gift.

Happy f*cking book birthday to you, Cassie, and to Lisa!

Inside the Acquisition Boardroom: The Reece Malcolm List by Amy Spalding, by Editor Stacy Cantor Abrams

In The Reece Malcolm List, Devan keeps a secret list of any information she can gather about her reclusive mother, Reece Malcolm. At the start of the story, all she knows about her mom are five things:

1. She graduated from New York University.
2. She lives in or near Los Angeles.
3. Since her first novel was released, she’s been on the New York Times bestseller list every week.
4. She likes strong coffee and bourbon.
5. She’s my mother.

When I acquired Reece, as well as a second stand-alone novel from Amy called Ink Is Thicker than Water, all I knew about Amy were five things:

1. She has an amazingly unique voice, reminiscent of other successful contemporary YA authors such as Sarah Dessen, Stephanie Perkins, or Susane Colasanti in its emotionality, but also laugh-out-loud funny at times.
2. She lives in or near Los Angeles.
3. Though this will be her debut novel, she is incredibly knowledgeable about the world of publishing, and is savvy about how to market herself in an effective and appealing way.
4. She’s a writer, so I can safely assume she likes strong coffee, and most likely also bourbon (maybe even together).
5. She’s going to be a star.

(Clearly many others in the YA community agreed with me, as the book went on to be endorsed by the likes of Sara Zarr, Courtney Summers, The Fug Girls [Heather Cocks and Jessica Morgan], Miranda Kenneally, and CK Kelly Martin.)

But I think beyond Amy herself and the quality of her writing, what made The Reece Malcolm List stand out for us was how it blended a somewhat quieter genre (contemporary coming-of-age with a smattering of romance—something not many publishers were taking a chance on at the time) with a higher-concept idea to broaden its audience and generate strong sales. In addition to learning about her mother, Devan’s story is about drama—that real-life actual drama of the performing arts. With movies like Pitch Perfect and shows like Glee maintaining appeal with the teen audience, we knew Devan’s love of performing combined with how it brings her a new group of friends and a first crush would be the perfect entry point for readers. Because adolescence is hard enough as it is—why not heighten it by putting your character in front of an audience, in a spotlight, in her pajamas?

Happy book birthday, Amy!

Writing Advice – Screw Their Rules, by Jus Accardo

Everything in life has rules.

Never stand while the vehicle is in motion. Do not tear the tags off a mattress. In San Francisco you’re not allowed to pile horse manure more than six feet high on a street corner. (I guess five feet is okay, though?)

Rules, rules, and more rules.

Obviously most rules are in place to keep us safe. Running with scissors really is a bad idea—especially for a klutz like me. Some though… Some are meant to be broken.

Writing, in my opinion, is about doing what works for you. Has someone told you how you do things is against the rules? I say screw their rules. The human mind is a pretty epic thing. Like snowflakes, no two minds are exactly the same. Something that works well for one person isn’t necessarily going to work for another.

I’m an organic writer. I don’t plot or outline. I don’t think too much before I start to write. I sit down in front of the keyboard and typetypetype. I guess you could say I don’t control my ideas—they control me. I remember when I first started out. I joined a critique group—my very first. I was new to writing. At least, writing with professional aspirations. I didn’t really fit with that first group, but something they said to me will always stick with me.

They said if I had any hope of making writing a career, I needed to follow rules. Outlines and plots. Planning in excruciating detail. There’s no way you can organize an entire book without it, they told me.

The rules…

My response?

BAHAHAHAHA.

I’ve never been a stickler for rules. But, I guess that’s a good thing. If I was, I probably wouldn’t have written Touch. Or, anything for that matter. The thing is, sometimes it’s okay to start your sentences with but or and. Sometimes it’s all right to do a little telling. Got a character that talks in clichés? If it fits his or her personality—then why not? It’s all about doing what works for you. It’s all about creating your own rules.

How many times have you gotten an awesome idea only to be told you shouldn’t pursue it? It’s too taboo, or not what the market is looking for. Screw that, and here’s why… Because you’re you. Who’s to say you won’t take that idea and put your own unique spin on it? If you’ve got a gut feeling, go for it. If you’re passionate about it, see it through. Look at it this way. Some of today’s bestselling books started life as highly criticized fanfic…

So, to summarize an extremely long, and sort of random ramble, screw their rules. Make your own. Everyone’s different. Embrace it!

Crushes: Crushing on the “Good” Bad Boy, by Vivi Barnes

Today’s my birthday—pretty special, even though I’m a few years past 30 (“few” is subjective, mind). So since it’s my birthday, and at the risk of sounding like Christoper Walken as The Continental (come on in), I’m going to sit back, have a sip of champagne, and indulge in thoughts of the hot romances that make reading and writing sizzle.

This will shock you, since I’m an Entangled author, but I love romance. Someone once asked me how I finish a manuscript so fast. My response was that in a first draft, I fly through the story just to get to the romantic scenes, and when I get to those I linger, luxuriating in the “will he/won’t he” tension. Then I move along at lightning speed until I get to the next encounter, where I dawdle a bit more. Of course, I go back in Round 2 and clean up the debris that remains from racing through the first draft.

So, naturally, I have to have a bit of a crush on my love interest to make my story work. And that crush is based on someone very close to me—my husband. Which is why my love interest is always going to have a bit of bad boy in him. Being the “good girl” that I am, I was naturally attracted to the “bad boy,” and my husband was the epitome of that. He was the guy who got arrested for throwing wild parties in college, the one whose friends would say, “You’re with this guy? You seem so nice.” But there’s a reason these attractions work in real life and in novels—the bad boy on the outside can be the sweetest, most thoughtful person on the inside. The combination of the opposing traits is magical!

So yeah, my love interests typically have some (or more) bad boy in them. It seems to be a theme in the stories I love to read most, too. Let’s face it—bad can be so good.

(Side note: my husband is the most amazing and responsible adult. The bad boy is buried, but not altogether gone.)

Stuff We Love: Shoes, by Cindi Madsen

I’m going to shock everyone, and admit something. Okay, deep breath. My name is Cindi Madsen and I’m a shoe addict. All right, that probably didn’t shock anyone who reads my blog, author bio, or follows me on twitter. But seriously, I can’t help it. I see a pair of shoes and it’s like what some people experience at a pet store. They just look so pretty, but they’re sitting there all sad, and they need someone to take them to a good home where they’ll be taken care of and worn out fun places. I feel like I’D be the best person for that job. Picking a favorite pair is like picking my favorite child, so I just decided to highlight a couple pair and hope the other shoes in my closet don’t take it too hard.
The pair that I get the most comments on, because as my husband says, they practically have their own light source are my hot pink platforms. I got these last year for Valentine’s day, after seeing them in the mall and doing big puppy dog eyes at my husband, so he’d know they’d be the PERFECT present. As I always say, flowers wither and die, but shoes are forever.

About a month before my birthday, I walked into Dillard’s and saw a pair of Steve Maddens. Now, I love Steve Maddens and these had glitter AND studs! I reverently went over and held them up for a moment before slipping my feet into them. So these are my newest pair. They say I’m a girl and I can kick your butt if I need to. (What? Your shoes don’t talk to you? Weird.)

Now I could put up pictures of a hundred more shoes, or take a picture of my closet to shoe how bad the addiction has gotten, but none of us have that kind of time. For one, I need to go look at all the shoes that searching for pictures to put in this post brought up. What if there’s a sale? So I’ll leave with a pair I stumbled across that I’m pretty sure need to be added to my collection. I’ll probably leave an oh-so-subtle note on my husband’s nightstand to let him know where to find me a Christmas present. I mean, how awesome are these? Pink and lace and a bow AND a skull? I think these shoes might just be one of those ‘you complete me’ pairs.

Now, as much as I hate to admit it, there are times when it’s just not practical to wear 4 to 5 inch heels. So what’s a girl to do? Well, I’ve got a pair of chunky rocker boots that I love and come in handy in cold Colorado weather, and when I want to throw on a T-shirt & jeans and be comfy, I go with my Converse sneakers. And in the summer, I wear my flip-flops everywhere (and I have lots of different flip-flops, some even sparkly) Like I said, I’m a shoe addict. I love them all!

So, what shoes can’t you live without?

Inside the Acquisition Boardroom: All the Broken Pieces by Cindi Madsen, by Editor Stacy Cantor Abrams

The reason I acquired Cindi Madsen’s All the Broken Pieces is a secret.

I often say I am looking for books that are “high concept,” and a lot of authors tend
to pull their hair out trying to determine what that means. The pitch for Cindi’s book
caught my eye because it perfectly fit the bill as a “high concept” story. But again,
why is a secret.

Cindi and I struggled a bit with how much of her story’s plotline to reveal in the
selling copy. We ultimately decided that reading the story already knowing the
twist ending would take too much away from the experience, so we left it very
vague. Leaving a lot of intrigued bloggers tearing their hair out wondering what
the main character Liv’s deal is. Is she a pixie? A vampire? No, she’s an everyday
girl in a contemporary story, falling in love for the first time and dealing with an
extraordinary past even she doesn’t know the full extent of. It’s a “techno-thriller”
mystery hybrid. And those of you who have read it will get why that phrasing is
funny.

At Entangled, we also don’t just want to acquire authors; we want to acquire
careers. And with no one else has that been truer for me than with Cindi. In
addition to her teen novels, I’ve also acquired two hilarious adult contemporary
novels from her: Cinderella Screwed Me Over, a fantastic women’s fiction romance
coming out late in 2013 via Entangled Select, and Falling For Her Fiancé, a perfectly
executed short romance scheduled on our Bliss line in early 2013. To say she’s
rewarded us many times over for our confidence in bringing her to Entangled is an
understatement!

So yeah, why I acquired Cindi Madsen’s All the Broken Pieces is a secret. If you want
to know the secret, you’ll have to give it a read.

Stuff We Love: Zombies, by Chloe Jacobs

A few years ago when I saw the first hint of the zombie craze coming to books and movies, I knew I would never understand the draw of it. I’m all for a good scare, but to me zombies were just gross.

I went happily on my way ignoring it as much as possible until I came across this new television show called The Walking Dead. I heard great things about it, so I decided to give it a shot. I was worried it wouldn’t live up to my expectations because there’s a fine line between doing a zombie flick (which to me is just a lot of screaming and snarling and blood), and creating a show that can carry the zombie theme week after week without getting stale.

Well, I was impressed. Like, really impressed. Yes, there are zombies, and yes they are pretty darn gross. But at the same time, the show drew me in. I couldn’t give it up because the characters were so compelling. I love that the show didn’t pull any punches, the choices these poor survivors are forced to make to keep each other alive are so hard. Everything is intense. There are real-life consequences to their actions, real-life problems to face, and the characters grow from their experiences.

So I picked up the graphic novels and started to read. I really recommend that fans of the television series read these. They really are fantastically done (although you’ll be disappointed that Daryl isn’t in the books—my one big complaint).

Ok, I decided to give zombies a fairer shot overall and picked up Monster Island by David Wellington and…well…I liked it too. This was original, different, and it proved to me that there could be more to zombies than the shuffling, brainless, moaning creatures they had always been portrayed as. It was definitely another take on a zombie theme.

It’s one month after a global disaster. The most “developed” nations of the world have fallen to the shambling zombie masses. Only a few pockets of humanity survive — in places rife with high-powered weaponry, such as Somalia. In New York City, the dead walk the streets, driven by an insatiable hunger for all things living.

One amongst them is different; though he shares their appetites he has retained his human intelligence. Alone among the mindless zombies, Gary Fleck is an eyewitness to the end of the world — and perhaps the evil genius behind it all.

From the other side of the planet, a small but heavily-armed group of schoolgirls-turned-soldiers has come in search of desperately needed medicine. Dekalb, a former United Nations weapons inspector, leads them as their local guide. Ayaan, a crack shot at the age of sixteen, will stop at nothing to complete her mission.

They think they are prepared for anything. On Monster Island they will find that there is something worse even than being undead, as Gary learns the true price of survival.

After that, I read this fantastic book by Isaac Marion called Warm Bodies. Besides being beautifully written, it proved that the zombie doesn’t have to be a one dimensional chomping machine. There are many ways to explore the genre, and this book does that by giving the reader hope for a dying race and telling you a love story—from the zombie perspective.

R is a young man with an existential crisis–he is a zombie. He shuffles through an America destroyed by war, social collapse, and the mindless hunger of his undead comrades, but he craves something more than blood and brains. He can speak just a few grunted syllables, but his inner life is deep, full of wonder and longing. He has no memories, no identity, and no pulse, but he has dreams.

After experiencing a teenage boy’s memories while consuming his brain, R makes an unexpected choice that begins a tense, awkward, and strangely sweet relationship with the victim’s human girlfriend. Julie is a blast of color in the otherwise dreary and gray landscape that surrounds R. His decision to protect her will transform not only R, but his fellow Dead, and perhaps their whole lifeless world.

Scary, funny, and surprisingly poignant, Warm Bodies is about being alive, being dead, and the blurry line in between.

And I can’t tell you how excited I am for the movie! I saw the trailer a few weeks ago, and I’ve been going back to watch it constantly.

So who else is giving zombies a chance, and what do you think so far?

Writing Wednesdays – Agents, by Sara Hantz

Today I’m talking about something that I’ve been asked about often, and that almost every writer at some time has deliberated on, particularly now when so much in publishing is changing. Having an agent.

Assuming you’ve decided that you’d like to have an agent, undertaking the search for one can be daunting, whether published or not. Finding a good agent, one you click with, has been compared with finding the right marriage partner. It’s an extremely personal decision and one person’s ideal agent is another person’s monster.

A literary agent is your business representative. They will try to sell your manuscript to a publishing house, handle contract negotiations (to get the best deal possible) and act as a go-between between you and the publisher.

An agent will use their insider knowledge to place your manuscript with the right editor. Also, many big publishing houses won’t accept unagented submissions, and even if they do it’s likely your manuscript will end up in a huge ‘slush’ pile. Having said that, many smaller publishers will accept unagented submissions, although most of them will say that agent submissions will be assessed quicker.

Also, when it comes negotiating the deal, a good agent can often obtain a higher advance/royalty rate than authors can for themselves. They can also fight for deal points, remove harmless-sounding but deadly clauses, and are familiar with all the legal issues concerning a publishing contract.

Although there are hundreds, if not thousands, of agents out there, not all of them will represent your genre, so finding out which ones do is a good place to start. This can be done in a number of ways: You can find out who the agent is of other authors writing in your genre – by searching online, or visiting the library or bookshops and looking in the acknowledgements pages of books, where authors often thank their agent. Or you can go to specialist websites such as Agent Query or Query Tracker and gather a list of agents who you think would fit with your requirements. You can also subscribe to Publishers Marketplace which is a huge database full of information about publishing – including deals made, reviews, agents, writers, editors, and publishing news. It costs $20US per month (though they do have a free months trial, which might be sufficient). Alternatively you can subscribe to their free emails Lunch Deluxe and Daily Deals.

Once you have compiled a list of suitable agents, check out their websites, so you can get a better idea of what they’re like and also find out their submission requirements. Remember to follow their guidelines to the letter. Some agents get over twenty thousand queries a year, and from these may only take on three or four clients. So when they’re culling queries, one of their criteria might be people who don’t follow their guidelines.

Another way to find out more about an agent is to visit their blog (if they have one), or follow them on twitter

Agents can take anything from five minutes (if it’s an email query) to more than a year to respond to your query. And in some cases may never respond at all. So, it’s not advisable to query one at a time. Many people will query up to 20 agents, often more, at any one time.

The bad news is, it’s at this stage where many people get stuck. It’s often said that it’s harder to get an offer of representation from an agent than it is a publisher. So, don’t be disheartened if you receive a flow of rejections. Don’t take it personally. It means that your project is not right for that agent at that particular time. Remember, every rejection is taking you one step closer to your goal of being published.

What makes a good agent? A good agent is one who’s willing to share their client list and published books. Be wary of any agent who tells you, either directly or on their website, that their client list is confidential and cannot tell you any books that are in the book stores which he/she has sold.

Good agents will be members of the Association of Authors’ Representatives (AAR), or state that they adhere to their code of practice.

NOTE OF CAUTION: Agents who ask for reading or editorial fees up front are deemed unethical and you should steer well clear of them. Before signing with any agent I advise you check them out on Preditors and Editors which is a site that gives information about agents and editors, and in particular you can see if any of them are not recommended.

You may be lucky enough to find yourself in the position of having more than one agent to choose from. So how do you know which one is right for you? There is no set rule because it varies from person to person, and depends on personal preferences.

One thing to consider is whether you want an agent who is hands on in terms of editing, or who leaves the writing to you and sends out the book as you submit it to them. You’ll also need to decide whether you want an agent who will simply get you the most money, or one who will help develop your career and help you become a better writer.

What’s an ideal author/agent relationship? Although each agent/writer relationship is unique, there are certain basic requirements of an agent. They should be honest with you, and have your best interests at heart. They should respond to your emails in a timely manner and support you and help build your career and develop your writing skills.

Likewise, as a writer, there are things you should bring to the relationship. You should aim to meet deadlines, honour any contracts, behave in a reasonable manner, realize that you are not their only client, and respect their time.

I hope this has given you an insight into how agents and writers work together. For those of you embarking on an agent search, good luck.

Inside the Acquisition Boardroom: Lea Nolan’s Conjure by Assistant Publisher Guillian Helm

I had the good fortune to be one of the early readers for Lea Nolan’s Conjure. Before I was even halfway through I knew that Liz had found something special in Lea’s writing—an ancient curse, hoodoo (not voodoo!!), sibling rivalry, and best of all, summer love. Lea’s three main characters are a pair of twins, Emma and Jack, and their longtime friend (and Emma’s new-found crush) Cooper. When Jack stumbles upon some buried treasure and is inadvertently cursed, all three must work together to cure the curse before it’s too late.

One of the greatest parts about Lea’s novel, in addition to all of the adventure, is the budding romance between Emma and Cooper. It has the electric pull that YA readers love, but is sweet enough to be accessible for a younger audience as well. Entangled has been building up a list of YA/MG crossover titles, and Conjure is a great example of a book that appeals to a middle grade audience and isn’t limited to ‘teens-only’.

Plus, with two strong boy characters, Conjure is not just a girl-read. I would definitely recommend it for guys and girls! What boy reader wouldn’t like a curse that explodes the skin off a person’s fingers until all that’s left is a chalky-white bone? Creeptastic in the best of all possible ways. (Did I mention that the curse is called The Creep? Amazing.)

Stuff We Love: Regency Romances, by Leah Rae Miller

My father was a voracious reader. He always carried a paperback of the latest horror story from Lumley or King. So that was what I read. For years I read nothing but the creepy stuff. I mean, I read Interview with the Vampire when I was twelve. I remember being a sophomore in high school and failing a physics test because instead of studying the night before, I stayed up reading The Shining. Then, in 2006, I became a mother and my ability to deal with the gore and murder and scary junk just… vanished.

It was 2007. I was at a Goodwill, rummaging through the fifty cent books, my reader’s soul crying out for something to read, when I picked up Slightly Dangerous by an author who is now my absolute favorite romance writer, Mary Balogh.

I’ll admit that up until this point I’d been one of those people that thought romance was trash, a joke, with all the heaving bosoms and bodice ripping and throbbing… Well, you get the idea. But I’m also one of those people that will try anything (except sky diving because that’s just crazy).

As you might imagine, I flew through the book. I found the time period to be magical, the imagery beautiful, and the characters fully realized. I was HOOKED. Not hooked like one-book-a-week hooked, either. I started ordering batches of books from those online used book sites. I bought RT Book Reviews whenever I could find it and would later get a subscription for Christmas. Not to mention, I began thinking that maybe I could be a writer.

Why do I love these books, you may ask? The thing about Regencies is they’re set during a time period that is at the same time familiar and fascinating to me. The heroines aren’t the weak, simpering wusses I was led to believe they were. They’re strong, intelligent women breaking the rules of the time in most cases. And the heroes, well, give me a duke or a count or a rake over a brooding vampire any day.

Some of my favorites are, of course, anything from Mary Balogh. I especially love the Slightly series and not only because that was the series that opened my eyes to this whole new world. She knows this genre, like really really knows it. Her characters  are vivid and complex. Her plots always tug at my heart strings.

There are so many great authors in this genre like Nicole Jordan, Stephanie Laurens, and Johanna Lindsey, to name just a few. Recently, I read No Longer a Gentleman by Mary Jo Putney which I loved.

As far as YA Regency goes, I haven’t really found any (hmm, *jots down that idea*), but Rachael Harris (author of My Super Sweet Sixteenth Century, a YA historical), suggested The Season by Sarah MacLean which is definitely going on my to-read list.

I’m especially a sucker for the governess and the duke/count/marquis/whatever trope and, this is slightly off topic but worth mentioning, I recently fell in love with the “original” story with this trope: Jane Eyre. How I’ve gone my entire life without reading this book is beyond me. I’m in the middle of it now and totally suggest you read it as well. But if you’d rather just watch a good movie, check out the recent version with Michael Fassbender (hubba-hubba) because it is so good.

Are you a regency fan? Do you have a favorite regency author? Do you think Michael Fassbender is as sexy as I do? Comment away!